MY BIOGRAPHY
Hi my name is Juan, I was born in Bogota(Colombia) on 27/4/2002, when I was 3 months my mom and my dad got divorcied, since that moment my dad disappeared, for that reason my mom left me in venezuela to finish her studies in Colombia cause i was born when she was too young, a year later she returned to venezuela and then we went to colombia, started to study in the I.D.I.C(instituto de integraciòn cultural), there i course 1º, 2º, 3º, 4º, living in my grandmom's house, then my mom met an increible man his name is Javier, he is the boss of an enterprice it's name is dougger, My mom had study to be odontologist and fashon designer, and in that moment my mom needed to work being a fashon designer and work in this, then we started to grow economically, a time later javier and my mom got married and gave life to my little brother joaquin, now we have a nice life and we are too happie.
Good job paisa but do not forget that proper names must be written in capital letters and that the perfect tenses use the participle form of the verbs.
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